I think our commercial was fitting to the product we were selling. We had a decent storyline, message, and we included our jingle and slogan. The commercial included the group members: Janie, Lauren, Chelsy, and Kathy, as friends. All four friends have music players, but one friend did not have a Cherry Top. The idea or focus of this commercial was the friend who did not have a Cherry Top music player. Thus, she would have issues, such as her mp3 not functioning properly. One detail that I would have changed about our commercial is the location. It would have been better to film in a place such as a mall, a store selling mp3 players, a music store maybe, outside, or even school, but not within a house.
I think their commercial was creative in that they started as a news report. I liked how reporter Larry was very animated and sounded like a real reporter. I found it so funny that reporter Bob was so “engaged” with his music player that he could not focus on the news report. That really gives the viewers the idea that people can get very interested in this music player. Also, when David walked into the room he also got so engaged in the music player that he walked into or “crashed” into the table in front of him. Overall, it was creative, clear, funny and had a good point.
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